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Evelyn Aurelias Leverta - Height, 322 meters.

This is a little birthday present that I whipped up for :iconlabbaart:. I've been friends with him for several years, and I figured it was about time I started giving back...

I came up with this idea about a year ago. I've always been into larger girls, but Labba has always prefered girls under half a kilometer. I figured, I should probably at least try something with a girl in that size range, to see what all the fuss was about. The idea was ill-formed, just 'giant princess on rampage', but it grew with time. Still, there were many other, larger girls to get to... so she got put on the backplate and forgotten.

That all changed a month ago. I was having trouble getting myself to write anything, so I asked Labba to request something from me, to give me an outside push. Of course, the first thing he thought of was that old, 'small' princess idea I had... and the rest, as they say, is history.

I think you'll all agree that Evelyn is a very nice, unappreciated goddess of a princess. She was in a bit of a bad mood when this story took place - she's usually only about 80% this cruel. Though, of course, she does have even worse days...

She's also much nicer to her own people, of course. She still treats them like slaves, but, well, they're more useful to her alive than dead. Plus, she finds some of them cute! She'll play with outsiders as much as she likes, but she's no worse than an average despot to her people. For instance, her servants usually last as much as a few months in her care, and only half of the turn over is from deaths! She's positively angelic, don't you agree?

She is at exactly 200 to 1 scale, for reference. She's 322 meters exactly because I based her character model off of a 161 cm girl.

I have plans to write more stories with Evelyn, which is why this is tagged as a prologue. I don't know if that will actually happen, but... live in hope!

This is the first story in the Evelyn Sequence. You can find the second story here: A Friend in Need I.

Evelyn Aurelias Leverta is my OC. I came up with her on my own, and I reserve all rights to the character.
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corruptionwriter Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Great stuff! Like the medievil setting
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Fifteen1413 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you enjoyed it! In my mind, the girl should be the single most powerful thing on her world - so, if I'm keeping her to such a small scale, only 200 to 1, I have to drop the tech level of the setting to match. I think makeing her a princess added a little touch to the story, too! Anything in particular you liked about the story?
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corruptionwriter Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm let´s see.
First of all I like the fact that she has servants and a castle. This occasionally happens in giantess stories but often the giantess is just too big for that to happen. I can only imagine what it is like to have to serve someone of that size... and character. Also I enjoy the idea of a giantess ruling her planet/solar system/cosmos more than them just destroying it.

Another thing I enjoyed was her character. Like Auctorita, I love the fact that they are just so arrogant, ruthless and, in a sense, petty. The way she acts without any care for human life, and only her own amusement is something I really enjoy in giantess/corruption stories.
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BlazingCobaltDA Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great work on this piece
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Fifteen1413 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
It hasn't even been uploaded long enough for you to have read it fully... but I appreciate the vote of confidence! Can't wait to hear from you when done!
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BlazingCobaltDA Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
13 pages in 9 minutes isnt that short of a time to read, but anyway, good work.
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